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maldar

Joined: 08 Jul 2008 Posts: 61 Location: Lawton, MI
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 8:51 pm Post subject: My current site for my coins |
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thestevens.name
Check it out and feel free to give some feedback as what to improve. I have not written a web page in years so it is not the best. Once I have the money I will be moving the site off my family's site to one dedicated for my future business.
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mundoo

Joined: 15 Jul 2008 Posts: 7 Location: Hindmarsh Island, Australia
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Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 5:22 pm Post subject: Re: My current site for my coins |
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maldar wrote: | thestevens.name
Check it out and feel free to give some feedback as what to improve. |
Spelling.
I see the following spelling errors
Home page: be taking iquiries for minting
should be enquiries not iquiries
Coins page: most resent stage of the design
should be recent not resent
Caching page: on one had the number of cachers
should be hand not had
This page has a lot of wrong grammar btw.
Comment: If you are quoting prices (and you are) then it would be helpful if you state somewhere which currency it is in. I have no idea which dollars you are. I looked in the Misc section and you say there that contact info will be there soon so I couldn't even see which country you lived in. There are approx. 21 countries who use dollars.
And just so this post isn't all negatives I liked the green and gold colourways of the pages. |
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maldar

Joined: 08 Jul 2008 Posts: 61 Location: Lawton, MI
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Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 8:45 pm Post subject: Re: My current site for my coins |
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mundoo wrote: | And just so this post isn't all negatives I liked the green and gold colourways of the pages. |
Thanks. I have no problems with those types of negatives as they are all constructive.
Glad you like the colors; I was going for the Ammo Can look. This is just a start, so it should look better in a year. Thanks for the heads up about the $ issue. I'm so use to $s being USD and now that I'm doing more in the international arena I need to be more aware.
I'll try to get to this matter on my next day off as I'm bushed now. _________________ Geocaching.com - The Search Engine is NOT ALWAYS You. |
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Joined: 02 Jul 2008 Posts: 51
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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 2:24 am Post subject: |
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First page - resonable prices (should be reasonable)
So nice that you included photographs - kinda makes it more personal. |
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Tooey

Joined: 02 Jul 2008 Posts: 193
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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 8:01 am Post subject: |
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Cool looking coins - are any of these still available? |
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maldar

Joined: 08 Jul 2008 Posts: 61 Location: Lawton, MI
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 8:38 pm Post subject: |
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Tooey wrote: | Cool looking coins - are any of these still available? |
Once I send out the Pre-Sale orders I will post back here when sales of the remaining coins will begin.
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maldar

Joined: 08 Jul 2008 Posts: 61 Location: Lawton, MI
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 11:12 pm Post subject: |
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I have updated my site with the help of the above post and I have added some info on the misc page. Hope this is better.
Thanks,
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